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MessageSujet: My aviation cartoon-F-4 Phantom   Mar 20 Mar - 6:47

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MessageSujet: Re: My aviation cartoon-F-4 Phantom   Mar 20 Mar - 13:43

Nice ones, very agressive ! thumright

But I would have a few comments : The second aircraft is nothing but a simple "copy/paste" of the first one, and that shows in a too obvious way, in my humble opinion ... the pilot should look forward, I think, or even toward the first one . That would be more "natural" ...
We should also see the shadow of this second plane on the ground , together with the "legendary" smokes of the engines, since the first plane's got them all think
On the two planes, the left jet intake is ok, but the right one (on the left on the picture) is too "round" scratch scratch scratch
Your phantoms look a bit like "single seaters" ... Maybe you could add, at least, the shape of the navigator on the back seat, don't you think ?

That said, your cartoon drawings are pretty cool and I hope to see more of them in the future Occasion

Gilles .
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MessageSujet: Re: My aviation cartoon-F-4 Phantom   Mar 20 Mar - 15:46

dilou27 a écrit:
Nice ones, very agressive ! thumright

But I would have a few comments : The second aircraft is nothing but a simple "copy/paste" of the first one, and that shows in a too obvious way, in my humble opinion ... the pilot should look forward, I think, or even toward the first one . That would be more "natural" ...
We should also see the shadow of this second plane on the ground , together with the "legendary" smokes of the engines, since the first plane's got them all think
On the two planes, the left jet intake is ok, but the right one (on the left on the picture) is too "round" scratch scratch scratch
Your phantoms look a bit like "single seaters" ... Maybe you could add, at least, the shape of the navigator on the back seat, don't you think ?

That said, your cartoon drawings are pretty cool and I hope to see more of them in the future Occasion

Gilles .

I will note your advice to modify.

Thank you.

Occasion Occasion
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MessageSujet: Re: My aviation cartoon-F-4 Phantom   Mer 21 Mar - 11:26

Cute ! but where are the WSOs ? shifty
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MessageSujet: Re: My aviation cartoon-F-4 Phantom   Mer 21 Mar - 14:56

Jü a écrit:
Cute ! but where are the WSOs ? shifty

HI Jü

WSOs, You meaning is weapon system?
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MessageSujet: Re: My aviation cartoon-F-4 Phantom   Mer 21 Mar - 23:58

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Jü a écrit:
Cute ! but where are the WSOs ? shifty

HI Jü

WSOs, You meaning is weapon system?
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I mean the Weapon Systems Officer in the back seat Wink
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